Read the essay through, quickly. Then read it again, with the following questions in mind. Please write extensive comments either on your workshop partner's draft where applicable or on this handout. If you need more room, continue writing on the back of this page.
Does this draft respond to the assignment? Argument of a debatable issue with Rogerian slant? Looking at the essay as whole, what thesis main point including writer's opinion is advanced?
Please exxmple the thesis on your workshop partner's draft. Peer review argumentative essay exmple it is implied only, jot down what you perceive to be the thesis here. Are the needs of the audience kept in mind?
For instance, do some concepts or words need to be defined? Is the evidence examples, testimony of authorities, personal observations clear and effective? Get into the margins of the draft and comment.
Is any obvious evidence or counter-evidence overlooked? Can you accept the writer's assumptions?
If not, why not? Please be honest and specific. Looking at each paragraph separately: What argkmentative the basic point? How does each paragraph relate to the essay's main idea or the previous paragraph?]